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Same Name, Different Version: Chapter 23 - The End

Title: Same Name, Different Version - Chapter 23: The End
Author: tmntraphfan
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: NT Raph/OT Mikey
Summary: Based on the Turtles Forever movie. Perhaps a sequel to the flick. What if a certain hothead was brought back to a certain dimension...supposedly trapped there...and certain thoughts of one brother became reality with another? Just because they have the same name, doesn't mean they're the same version.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters, nor do I make anything off of this. Hope you enjoy this one. Just so you know the reason you see OT and NT before some names is so you can tell whether it’s the “Old Toon” or “New Toon” version talking.

(Author’s Note: The Last Chapter. Well…hope you guys enjoyed the story. It’s the first ‘long’ story that I ever wrote. Let me know whether it was good/bad/ugly or whatnot lol. And thank you for reading.)



Chapter 23: The End

The hothead swung back and forth on his hammock. His hands were arched back and around the back of his head, while his right leg dangled off of his swinging bed. All Raph could do was think back on everything that had happened to him.

He had watched his father apologize profusely to his mate…although it made Raphael smile when the midget gave his father a big bear hug, causing laughter not only from his Splinter, but from his Mikey’s as well. Raph could still see that twinkle of nervousness in his father’s eyes when he looked at that other rat…he felt bad for him…

But still…you never know…

Chuckling at that thought, the hothead reminisced on how he had made some time to spend his baby brother…although he could tell that (NT) Mikey still felt bad about it.

‘Heh…hopefully the knucklehead will forget that kinda stuff soon.’

It really was fun spending some time with his baby bro again…the whole thing was still pretty strange. Someone who you had a crush on your whole life, and you find it he had the same crush on you…definitely strange.

Raphael smiled fondly at the thought of his mate…not only had he chosen…but he was happy with his choice.

Leonardo had been supportive…even more than Raph would have thought of…almost as if Leo somehow knew Raphael’s whole ‘thought process’ during the situation.

Donatello had unfortunately been kept out of the loop…but right before Raphael had entered his bedroom, while his mate entered the kitchen, his baby brother asked softly,

“Uhm…so…what should I tell Donnie, if…well you know…if he asks?”

The hothead turned around and smiled warmly, simply muttering, “The truth….don’t worry…I trust ya kid.”

It was worth if for the smile that became almost engrained into his brother’s face, giving his big brother a hug before racing off, almost too eager to tell his brainiac brother the news.

‘Wonder how Don will take it…well…probably not too bad…sure he’d go into that whole ‘instinct/species’ science stuff…eh.’

Hearing his door open and close, Raph rose up and watched as his mate slowly walked over and climbed into the hammock. (OT) Michelangelo’s small body easily climbed on top of the hothead, as his small hands smoothly massaged up and down Raphael’s thick thighs.

Slowly moaning at those touches, Raph raised his arms and pressed them towards Mikey’s ass, fondling and gripping the rumpled end of his mate as he felt Mikey straddle the hothead.

“Heh…miss me that much kid, eh?”

“Mmm…always.”

Softly pressing his small beak into his mate’s strong neck, Michelangelo breathed in his lover’s scent as his tongue slowly dragged and licked along a patch of dark green skin. He kissed and nipped past the neck, and over onto Raph’s left shoulder.

Not wanting to be out done, one of Raphael’s hands slowly squeezed, then stroked, the smaller turtle’s tail. Gaining a strong moan from the little guy, Raph couldn’t help but grin as the other hand slowly stroked Mikey’s left thigh. He eased the hand along that soft skin that he had grown to love, dragged it past Mike’s ass and slowly teasing the younger turtle’s opening.

Moaning a little louder at that action, Michelangelo slowly nipped upward. His tongue dragged and suckled from shoulder to neck, neck to cheek, and then cheek to his mate’s tongue. Seeking entrance, Raphael opened his mouth as he felt the smaller tongue tease and caress his bigger one. Leaning down more, Mikey kissed and almost swallowed his mate’s tongue, loving the feeling of the red appendage wiggling and almost slobbering in his mouth. Quickly letting the tongue go, Mikey kissed around his mate’s mouth, soft pecks and licks littered the hothead’s face as the youngster’s hands been pressing and groping up and down Raphael’s plastron.

“Mmm…want ya Raphie…pl--eeeeeassse.”

‘Well…how can I say no to that? Well, actually…why the hell would I?’

Turning the small turtle over so that he was hovering above his mate, Raphael pressed one hand along Michelangelo’s slit, hands going from soft to hard, then soft again, massaging the area with just tips of his fingers as he drank in the moans and faces of pleasure that Mikey was making. The other hand rose up, massaging the younger one’s plastron, soothing the area with a circular movement until he felt Michelangelo ease further and further down into Raphael’s hammock.

The soothing, almost petting motions of his lover’s hand, while Raph’s other hand was making his cock almost as hard as a diamond…Michelangelo’s mind was slowly boiling out as he released his shaft out into the open, immediately feeling a strong, dark green hand caress and slowly pump the organ.

‘S-s-sooooo good.’

“Hehe, thanks kid.”

‘Oops’. Mikey hadn’t meant to say that out loud…although the cocky grin but soft, caring eyes made the youngster now glad that he had done just that.

Raising his head up, silent asking for another kiss, Raphael complied and pressed his beak into his lover’s, as the hothead began moving his hand slowly up and down, teasing the hid up and down, then side to side, until the precum started dripping like crazy. Feeling Michelangelo shudder, and hearing gasps escaped through his mate’s kiss, Raphael leaned back as he dragged the tip of Mikey’s cock with one finger, slowly spreading the precum around in a circle, before popping the digit into his mouth.

“Mmmm…tastes really good kid…think I need a little more…”

“Oooo you do please yes you doooo….oops…”

Yet again, Michelangelo’s young and ‘cartoony’ mind was still making his thoughts escape out of his mouth without really wanting to…but once again, all his mate did was chuckle as Raph slowly slid down and took the smaller turtle’s cock into his mouth.

Gasping and feeling his body straighten in pleasure, all Mikey could do was hum with gratitude as he felt his toes tingle, then flex hard, with pleasure. Staring down, he watched as Raphael slowly dragged his tongue up and down like an ice cream cone, slowly stopping at the tip and sucking the droplets of precum that seemed to be oozing like crazy right now.

Enjoying the scent and heat, yet alone the taste, that was coming off of his lover, Raph turned his attention to one side of Michelangelo’s shaft, softly kissing and nibbling his way up and down. Grinning at the seemingly sudden shocks that rose out of the smaller turtle’s body, making Mikey’s thighs jolt up and down in pleasure, the hothead switched to the other side, giving it the same treatment. Staring up into Michelangelo’s soft and lust-filled eyes, Raphael easily deep-throated the younger one’s cock, humming and suckling with pleasure as both of his hands stroked up and down Mikey’s inner thighs.

Rolling his eyes back…Michelangelo was trying to keep quiet since they knew that everyone else was just outside…either his big lover didn’t care anymore or…or…

Mikey’s mind drifted away, because all he could think and feel was his lover’s mouth suck hard and faster, making the younger one cry out a resounding “Raphie” as he came, squirting his cum deep and hard into the hothead’s mouth. All Raph could do was smile and hum as he felt the enriching taste of his mate enter his mouth, wiggling his tongue around as he sucked and swallowed, eager to get every drop of his lover’s sex.

Now…usually this would make his mate completely brain dead…but this time it just made Mikey rise up and wrap his arms around Raphael’s head, begging to him,

“Please…you…in me…NOW! Please, please please dude, pretty please with chocolate on top and….oooo god yes…”

Again…how was the hothead supposed to say no to that? And again…why would he?

Michelangelo couldn’t help it. The little drama and stuff that had happened to them recently…when he was in the kitchen, the kid just thought of it all. Meeting his lover…fighting side by side with him…seeing Raph get hurt, the pain and hurt…he just wanted to feel his Raphie inside of him. Needed to feel this beautiful warrior deep inside him, right at that moment.

Raphael’s cock slipped nicely into his mate’s ass…thankfully, they had been *cough* bunnies as his own baby brother Mikey had called them on the way back to the lair.

‘Just cause it’s true don’t mean jack…’

But the hothead still started off slowly, thrusting softly in and out of the tight caverns of his small lover, enjoying the intoxicating sight of Michelangelo quivering his lips and slowly twitching his eyes in pleasure. Feeling Mikey’s small legs wrap around his bulky body, Raph took one hand and placed on Michelangelo’s hips for support, as the other grabbed a piece of the hammock below him. Pulling on that piece of the hammock, Raph started pushing in and out, rolling his hips and matching the eager and hungry movements of Mikey’s hips. Staring down, Raph was just amazed and hypnotized by having this young, innocent creature in his hands. Those soft, wide eyes staring up at him in awe and wonder, whispers of “Raphie, more yes more” or “Harder, please, faster” were uttering out of his small mate’s mouth. It made Raph let go of the hammock and caress his lover’s face, rubbing his thumb just below Mikey’s left eye as his hips pumped faster and harder.

Michelangelo moaned again and again, feeling his ass tighten then relax as he felt his lover’s big, throbbing cock press deeper, hitting that special bundle of nerves again and again. Gasping harder and harder, Michelangelo felt his toes clenching and flexing, both of his feet wiggling as they pressed themselves hard against the back of his Raphie’s shell. Intoxicated by the scent of his lover and the feeling of his mate fucking him ‘oh so damn good!’…it took him a moment to feel the thumb caressing his cheek. Staring at that thumb, then up to his mate, Michelangelo blushed as his eyes became teary.

It was always so enthralling and humbling that his big, tough, heroic warrior had set his sights on him. The feelings and happiness and new sort of life that his Raphie had given him…it was one of the reasons that made the smaller turtle so vehemently protective of this creature. And seeing those warm eyes that almost whispered ‘everything will be okay’…and he believed those words…and that soft touch that was not touching him so wonderfully.

‘The dude definitely has a big heart…and I get to see it all the time…’

Smiling back up at his larger lover, Michelangelo took his mate’s hand, making the fingers of their hands entangle with each other. Raphael began pushing his cock faster and harder into his mate, almost lifting the smaller turtle off of the hammock as Mikey grasped and pulled his mate’s shoulder down with his other hand, pressing his Raphie close to his body. Feeling his climax quickly approaching, Raph fought it off, wanting to feel his lover cum before him.

Pumping his cock in and out of his Mikey’s ass, Raphael could feel his mate tremble as Michelangelo gasped out loudly. The kid’s shaft pumped loads of hot cream up between their bodies, covering both of their plastrons with white cum, as Raphael reached down and squeezed his mate’s cock, making Michelangelo groan long and loud.

Feeling his shaft spurt small jets of hot cum onto Raphael’s hand, Michelangelo purred loudly as he could feel his mate’s cock tingle deep inside him. Opening his eyes, Mikey screamed out,

“No p-please…m, m, mouth Raphie…iiiin my mout-ooooo-outh…please wanna t-t-t-taaaaste you….please….”

Rumbling loudly at the way Mikey was begging, Raph pulled out and straddled his lover’s small body, his achingly needy cock just tapping at the youngster’s lips, as Michelangelo eagerly opened it wide. Dragging his tongue teasingly yet hungrily across the tip, Michelanglo purred as he watched the hothead lose it, yelling out “Mikey” as the youngster felt the lovely wetness and addictive taste of his lover jut out onto his lips.

Gasping and feeling his body tighten in pleasure, Raph huffed out breaths again and again as he stroked his exploding shaft over his lover’s face. The hothead couldn’t help but moan lowly as he watched his cum shoot and spray into his Mikey’s mouth, seemingly coating every inch of the youngster’s tongue. Raphael’s rumbles of pleasure grew more as he watched how sluttish the kid looked as he eagerly swallowed and licked up the hot cream, feeling and hearing the kid purr in pleasure as he moved off of the cock, making the hothead’s shaft dribble small shots of cum onto the young turtle’s beak and cheeks.

Michelangelo couldn’t help but smile and lick his lips hungrily as he saw the look on his Raphie’s face. Smiling slowly, he took his mate’s cock and rubbed it slowly across his own beak and cheeks, before slowly taking the tip back into his mouth and suckling that last drops of semen. Smacking his lips at the enriching taste, Michelangelo proceeded to scoop the drops and lines of cream on his face, slowly dragged each bit down to his mouth…he didn’t want any of that going to waste.

Hungrily staring down at his small lover, Raphael attached his lips strongly onto the kid’s beak, slowly working his tongue along the bits and drops that Mikey had missed. He didn’t mind tasting himself…not in these circumstances. Easing himself off of his mate, Raph immediately felt the smaller turtle’s weight as Michelangelo wrapped both arms around the hothead’s waist. Feeling the kid purr and softly lick at his neck, Raph chuckled at that before turning around to face his mate. Rubbing his hand along Mikey’s shoulders, all Raph could do was smile and softly say, “I really do love you kid…”

Immediately, Mikey’s eyes widened and he quickly blabbered out, “Oh yeah…there’s one thing I have to show you, real quick!”

‘Heh…wasn’t the answer I thought I would get…’

Raphael still couldn’t help but smile and laugh as he watched Mikey reach his arm over to a pile of papers that were near the bed/hammock. Rather clumsily at that, as the younger turtle barely had any energy left in his small body.

“Got it…uhm…well I’ve been working on this…for a good, long while and…it’s sort of a present….here ya go, dude!”

It seemed like a plain, vanilla envelope. Curious as to what his lover was talking about, Raphael took it and slowly opened the small package. Feeling something slim inside…

‘Hmmm…feels like a book…’

“Well…I made this comic book and…I-I hope, uh like it…”

Watching the shy look on Mikey’s face, Raph’s face perked up at the words…

“Ya made a comic book? Alright little man, let’s see what we…”

When he finally had pulled it out…Raphael was left speechless. He knew that his mate was a talented artist…and it was beautiful art but…as Raphael fingered the comic as if it was gold or something, the hothead’s eyes shimmered with wetness…but the ‘subject’ of this comic book…

“Me…you drew a comic about…me?”

“Yeah dude, like totally! See look,” reaching over, Michelangelo told Raphael where to turn, “this is you totally kicking ass, and this is you riding the motorcycle, and this is..well… ‘us’ heh…some of those pages I got a little bit too…graphic I guess…” blushing profusely at that, Michelangelo continued on, showing Raphael the ins and outs, the storyline he had made…and all Raph could do was ponder in awe and silence.

Mikey had made him into a comic book hero…watching the pages that Mikey asked him to go, Raph saw himself fighting unending armies of villains, doing death-defying stunts, and…wow…

‘Mikey wasn’t kidding….these are pretty graphic…although…mmm, I guess we could try that position out hehe…’

Snapping out of his thoughts was a soft, simple phrase that came out of his young lover’s mouth.

“And I…really love you too…Raphie.”

Turning towards Michelangelo, Raphael allowed the tears to fall as he leaned in, feeling his Mikey’s mouth caress and nibble at his own, both greedily and hungrily. Leaning back down onto the hammock, he felt Mikey snuggle and wrap his arms around his own bulky body.

Mikey whispered out, “Uhm…you mind telling me a bed time story…maybe this…?”

Teasing the cover of the comic, Raph snorted and said, “Aren’t ya too old for bedtime stories?”

“Dude, you’re never too old! Besides…this is a good one…and it has an awesome ending.”

“Oh really…okay then…let’s find out then.”

Opening to page one of the comic book, Raphael was about to start reading before he felt a soft kiss on his cheek.

“I know you’ll like it, especially the ending…at least…heh, I hope you like it.”

Kissing Mikey’s lips before the kid continued, Raph rasped out, “I know I’ll love it Mikey. I know I will.”

And…all throughout that night…all you could hear in the lair, was the sound of a bedtime story being told.

And yes…it indeed was a happy ending.



(Author’s Note: Thank you, hope you have enjoyed, let me know what you thought of the story, and take care. I read all of your stuff and I know mine will never come close to the well written and extremely erotic stuff of your guys’ writing. But hopefully I’ll at least come close lol. Once again…thanks.)












PSSS

Stopping in front of the door, the bigger Michelangelo looked at his twin, “Now are you really, like really, really sure about this?”

The smaller Mikey quipped back with, “Dude…I trust Raphie. And I know the big guy trusts me wholeheartedly. Besides…I think this would be Raphie’s biggest fantasy. Fulfilling that? That’s pretty powerful for me dude!

Michelangelo was still unsure…he had dreamt for so long to be with his older brother but…

“Big Mikey, just imagine dude…if I’m right…and I’m sure I am…Raphie will be begging for us, and he’ll be loving it…”

Quick as a flash, Michelangelo disappeared into his older brother’s room, while Raphael’s mate smiled and scanned the empty lair.

Experiments…fantasies…threesomes…yes, (OT) Mikey was glad that Raph had showed him stuff on that ‘Internet’ thing. Smiling widely, this Mikey followed his bigger twin and closed the door to his mate’s room. ‘Fun indeed.’




Chapter 1: community.livejournal.com/turtlecest/680996.html#cutid1
Chapter 2:
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Chapter 3:
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Chapter 4:
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Chapter 5:
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Chapter 6:
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Chapter 7:
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Chapter 8 Part 1:
community.livejournal.com/turtlecest/686890.html#cutid1
Chapter 8 Part 2:
community.livejournal.com/turtlecest/687161.html#cutid1
Chapter 9:
community.livejournal.com/turtlecest/688462.html#cutid1
Chapter 10:
community.livejournal.com/turtlecest/689410.html#cutid1
Chapter 11:
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Chapter 12:
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Chapter 13:
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Chapter 14:
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Chapter 15: community.livejournal.com/turtlecest/695365.html#cutid1
Chapter 16: community.livejournal.com/turtlecest/696367.html#cutid1
Chapter 17: community.livejournal.com/turtlecest/696810.html#cutid1
Chapter 18: community.livejournal.com/turtlecest/698712.html#cutid1
Chapter 19: community.livejournal.com/turtlecest/699992.html#cutid1
Chatper 20: community.livejournal.com/turtlecest/702420.html#cutid1
Chapter 21: community.livejournal.com/turtlecest/703583.html#cutid1
Chapter 22: community.livejournal.com/turtlecest/706796.html#cutid1
Tags: fanfic2009, fanfic2010, member: tmntraphfan, pairing: mike/raph, pairing: raph/mike, rating: nc-17 the first

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[info]rock_gaara

January 14 2010, 14:52:21 UTC 2 years ago

Ok!! I'll try to make a WHOLE critique of the fanfic here.

To begin with: I really enjoyed reading this fic, I LOVE long fics and this one... felt short! xD (Which means that I honestly liked it and wanted more!). But if you want me to be 'mean' in exchange of seeing it as tips.. I'll say what I 'disliked' about the fic.

Thinking about it, more than a critique this is a personal opinion, so you shouldn't take it too seriously, since you can't create something that EVERYONE likes! (I try to keep in mind that though when I draw... ·_·U I know MOST people dislikes what I draw).

Well, those things I didn't like were, plot-like, the lack of real trouble. It starts with one, yeah,: Raphael trapped in another dimension and unable to get back home. Once he gets back to home, the real problems lack as Splinters being unsopportive of Raph and OTMikey's relationship lasts short, aswell as NTMikey's intent on having Raph back. Maybe he should have tried harder without actually turning himself into the story's 'badguy'.

Another lil' thing that wasn't my cup of tea was the feeling of Raph being out of character at some points. I can understand that OTMikey has affected him and so, but I like my Raph to be the hothead he is and all of that... Hmmm...

I really enjoyed the sex scenes! :D You were pretty original and not repetitive at all! I think it was pretty HOT to have lil' Mikey topping our rough Raph *drools* ... OTMikey was really fun to read and I liked him pictured as an insatiable teen when it came to sex! xD

I would have liked a bit of NTRaph x NTMikey, but that PS was pretty promissing... <3


Again, this was my personal opinion, just as I expect to see more from you and enjoy reading more of your fantastic fanfiction! :D

Here you have a fan HUNGRY of more RMR! <3

[info]azura_bushroot

January 14 2010, 19:57:36 UTC 2 years ago

By far, one the most well written pieces on this site. I just can't put it to words how much I love this...

I hope we do not lose you. I look forward to more of your work and ideas.
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